Officers Academy (character creation)

[reefwood]

Craft and fabricate

Rather than respond to everything thing that has come up, I am going to present the general rules for how things work in Pathfinder and in this campaign. I know you already know some of this stuff, but I want to list it all out together and simplified for everyone to see. Especially since there are some minor changes and additions to rules too. Please read everything if you have any interest in crafting or having an item crafted. I know this is probably more than you need to know right now, but I'm trying to cover my bases in case related circumstances come up in the future.

1) The fabricate spell can be used to create an item but not to repair or refit it. A masterwork item can be created with this spell, but as per the Craft rules, this requires 2 Craft checks: 1 for the standard component (item) and 1 for the masterwork component. Both Craft checks must succeed to finish the item. If 1 Craft check fails, the spell will need to be cast again to retry the failed Craft check. If 1 component is ruined, only the raw materials for the failed component need to be replaced.

2) The raw material cost for an item is 1/3 its price. The price of a chain shirt is 100 gp. The price of a masterwork chain shirt is 250 gp. Looking at the masterwork component separately, raw materials for the masterwork component of armor cost 50 gp, and raw materials for the masterwork component of a weapon cost 100 gp.

3) The price of studded leather armor for a Medium humanoid is 25 gp, so the price of Large nonhumanoid studded leather barding for a warsteed is 100 gp (raw materials cost 33.33 gp), and the masterwork version is 250 gp (raw materials cost 83.33 gp).

4) Raw materials to create an item or component must be obtained from an equipment line that normally provides the already completed item or component. Additionally, you must be somewhat specific as to the type of raw materials obtained, and the degree of specificity will vary between different item types. A general type such as "scroll raw materials" or "potion raw materials" is usually fine because the specifics for these items, such the spell or an inexpensive material component, can be provided by the caster. However, armor is more complicted and requires a greater degree specificity because a hunk of metal can't be used to create leather armor. I look at the description of the item for guidance on this matter. Studded leather armor will require "leather/metal armor raw materials" which can also be used to create other armors that are mostly leather with some metal. Full plate armor will require "full plate raw materials" because it requires various materials (metal, leather, padding), unlike most other armors, and this means it can't be used for most other armors, but this raw material can also be combined with the raw materials for chainmail to create half-plate. Chainmail is based off the chain shirt, which is made only of metal, so "metal armor raw materials" can be used to create a chain shirt, chainmail, or in conjunction with "full plate raw materials" to create half-plate.

5) Raw materials have weight. It seems to make sense that raw materials will weigh more than the finished product because raw materials often need to be shaved or cut or otherwise depleted to shape the finished item. Using the Craft rules for guidance, I will say that raw materials weigh 1/3 more than the weight of the finished item. It seems like raw materials will be obtained for specific items, so it should be easy to figure out the weight. Raw materials for one suit of full plate cost 500 gp. Holding onto 250 gp of "full plate raw materials" is enough for half a suit of full plate, so it will weigh 1/3 more than half a suit of full plate (50 lbs/2 = 25 lbs/3 = 8.33 lbs + 25 lbs = 33.33 lbs). Also, I'm not going to worry about weight during Time Off, but if you bring raw materials on a mission, it will matter if it weighs 20 lbs or 80 lbs, and you can't make a 50 lb item out of 20 lbs of raw materials. Alternatively, excess raw materials can be stored in your equipment locked with the main army (or other secure location), but to use them later, you have to be able to access them.

6) Nimarious can fabricate masterwork armor, which can then be enchanted by the main army through unspent equipment lines, but this will require upgrade time as per the normal rules for creating magic items (8 hrs per 1,000 gp and work 8 hrs in a day). For example, turning masterwork full plate into +3 full plate will take 9 days.

7) Equipment lines from reward pacakges must be saved or spent with any leftover amount being wasted. I know that this new Craft info may change already selected reward packages, and that is fine, but any equipment lines spent must be finalized before that equipment is used, so raw materials must be selected in full before they are used. You can't wait to see how it turns out before deciding how much to spend. That being said, Nimarious has a high enough Craft (armorsmithing) modifier that he can't ruin the raw materials for any of the items proposed so far. However, he may not complete all the items during Time Off. Based on a timeline where Nimarious only uses enough teleport to collect his rewards (and not teleport skeletons all over the place), this gives him 14 castings of fabricate. 3 suits of masterwork full plate and 7 suits of masterwork studded leather barding will require a minimum of 10 castings and 2 Craft checks per item for a total of 20 Craft checks, and he can get all this done as long as he doesn't fail more than 4 Craft checks...I think...at least that's how the basic math seems to add up, but it could play out differently.

Finally, depending on what everyone wants to do, I might wait to play out the Time Off tasks and rolls until the start of the next session...which will be fine because this next mission will probably require 1.5 sessions instead of 2 full sessions, so doing this at the table shouldn't get in the way of completing the mission in 2 sessions.

[reefwood]

Refitting Armor

Oops...forgot to go over this in the last post.

Craft (armorsmithing) is the skill used to refit armor, and doing it yourself does mean that you can do it for 1/3 the price, as per the raw materials rule. However, I don't think there are any spells that do this sort of thing, so the time required will have to follow the standard Craft rules. Using Nimarious and Fighter #1 as an example...

Make an appropriate Craft check representing one week's worth of work. If the check succeeds, multiply your check result by the DC. If the result × the DC equals the price of the item in sp, then you have completed the item. (If the result × the DC equals double or triple the price of the item in silver pieces, then you've completed the task in one-half or one-third of the time. Other multiples of the DC reduce the time in the same manner.) If the result × the DC doesn't equal the price, then it represents the progress you've made this week. Record the result and make a new Craft check for the next week. Each week, you make more progress until your total reaches the price of the item in silver pieces.

Taking 10 on Craft (armorsmithing) provides a result of 25 vs DC 19 for full plate, so it is a success.

25 x 19 = 475 silver pieces of work completed in 1 week

The refitting for Fighter #1 requires 600 gp, so raw materials cost 200 gp, which equals 2,000 silver pieces of work. Nimarious can complete the refit in just over 4 weeks.

Progress by the Day: You can make checks by the day instead of by the week. In this case your progress (check result × DC) should be divided by the number of days in a week.

Dividing the 475 sp of work by 7 days is 67.8 silver pieces per day. It will take Nimarious 29.5 days to complete the refit.

Special: You may voluntarily add +10 to the indicated DC to craft an item. This allows you to create the item more quickly (since you'll be multiplying this higher DC by your Craft check result to determine progress). You must decide whether to increase the DC before you make each weekly or daily check.

This increase the DC to 29, which Nimarious cannot reach by Taking 10. He can take the gamble to roll to work faster, but this also means he will now have a chance to ruin the raw materials if his result is less than 25.

Let's say Nimarious rolls 15 for a total of 30 vs DC 29. Success!

30 x 29 = 870 silver pieces of work completed in 1 week

Nimarious will finish the refit in 2.3 weeks.

Dividing by 7 for a daily result - which also means rolling 1/day instead of 1/week - is 124.2 silver pieces per day which will take 16.1 days to complete the refit.

A masterwork tool would make this go slightly faster (15.1 days), and of course, this is assuming Nimarious succeeds on every Craft check and has an average result of 30 (or 32 w/ masterwork tool).

Of course, if there is a spell that lets you alter high quality items to specific criteria (instead of just create or repair), it may be applicable to this task.

[reefwood]

Re: Craft - NPC Expert

One more item related to this topic...

NPC Experts will be the ones making Craft checks if you have the main army do this work for you. The level of the NPC will depend on the reward package selected.

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Let's use the Standard Combat package for Level 10 which will provide a 10th-level Human Expert:

Basic NPC: Int 13 +2 racial +1 ability score increase (4th-level) +1 ability score increase (8th-level) +1 (Int magic item) = Int 18 (+4)

Craft (armorsmithing): 10 ranks +4 Int +6 Skill Focus +2 masterwork tool = +22

This NPC can Take 10 for a result of 32. You can opt to have the NPC to work faster by increasing the DC +10 and/or have the NPC roll instead of Taking 10.

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At 11th-level, PCs will have access to a Gnome Expert who receives a +2 racial bonus to Craft. These are the stats for an 11th-level gnome Expert:

Basic NPC: Int 13 +1 ability score increase (4th-level) +1 ability score increase (8th-level) +1 (Int magic item) = Int 16 (+3)

Craft (armorsmithing): 11 ranks +3 Int +6 Skill Focus +2 racial +2 masterwork tool = +24

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A 12th-level Gnome Expert will have an Intelligence score of 18 (+4):.

Basic NPC: Int 13 +1 ability score increase (4th-level) +1 ability score increase (8th-level) +1 ability score increase (12th-level) +2 (Int magic item) = Int 18 (+4)

Craft (armorsmithing): 12 ranks +4 Int +6 Skill Focus +2 racial +2 masterwork tool = +26


I already said that you don't have to worry about time to refit the full plate this time, and maybe I should have figured out the rules myself before saying so, but I don't mind giving players freebies this first time since its new and this can be an unusual campaign in terms of time. However, the free time was assumed to have the main army do the refitting. If PCs want to do the refitting themselves at a discount, they will have to spend the actual time required.

Also, the gnome Expert idea was dropped because a gnome does not gain a racial bonus to Int, so the +2 racial bonus to Craft would provide the same result as a human expert with the racial bonus to Int.

[michael]

Also, the gnome Expert idea was dropped because a gnome does not gain a racial bonus to INT, so the +2 racial bonus to Craft would provide the same result as a human expert with the racial bonus to Int.

The racial bonus to Intelligence is +2 to the intelligence score, which only adds +1 to the intelligence modifier. A +2 bonus to Craft would leave the overall craft score 1 higher than a +2 bonus to INT.

[reefwood]

Re: Crafting

Nov 19, 2010 18:37:43 GMT -5 michael said:

Also, the gnome Expert idea was dropped because a gnome does not gain a racial bonus to INT, so the +2 racial bonus to Craft would provide the same result as a human expert with the racial bonus to Int.

The racial bonus to Intelligence is +2 to the intelligence score, which only adds +1 to the intelligence modifier. A +2 bonus to Craft would leave the overall craft score 1 higher than a +2 bonus to INT.

Thanks for catching that! I'll edit the prior post with the corrected info.

[reefwood]

Brion Shaw - Re: Level 10 Rewards

Nov 19, 2010 1:41:59 GMT -5 michael said:

Nov 18, 2010 20:24:36 GMT -5 icnivad said:

Ok, Nim will be teleporting to the main army at the beginning of the first day, and ad the end of the fifth.

With 4 level 5 castings a day, this leaves 16 castings of Fabricate.
Nim is going to fabricate 3 suits of masterwork full plate.
If anyone else needs anything, just let me know (and you have to supply the raw material, which comes out of 'nonmagical gear')
We should assume I'll fail the casting about 20% of the time, which means about 13 successes. But I could fail miserably, or succeed every time. Just have to see how the roll plays out.

Michael, if you need me to teleport any other time, I could do that, too.
-T

You should fabricate the barding for the horses instead. The suits of Full Plate are already magically enhanced, and "magic items cannot be created or transmuted with the fabricate spell."

If I don't buy the barding, I have 1750g remaining. I'll have to spend 1100g to refit the Full Plates, but the remaining 650g gives us some cushioning for failed castings of Fabricate, and some extra items as well.

EDIT: I still have to spend 1/3 the cost of the barding for the materials, but does that mean 1/3 the base price, or 1/3 the masterwork price? I assume it would be the base price, and making it masterwork is why you need to make a craft check. That would mean I have to spend 300g to buy materials for 9 pieces of studded leather barding, leaving me with 350g. If I have to spend 1/3 of the masterwork price, it costs 83.33g per barding, so 9 of them is 750g. I would only be able to afford materials for 7 bardings, and it would cost 583.33g.

Is Brion going to change his reward package?

Brion could just obtain raw materials for his warsteeds. Or spend less on onyx for Nimarious. Also, it looks like Sahme is choosing to not level up, so he won't have any rewards to add this time, but most likely, his next reward package will be bigger than Brion's right now.

[michael]

Is Brion going to change his reward package?

Brion could just obtain raw materials for his warsteeds. Or spend less on onyx for Nimarious. Also, it looks like Sahme is choosing to not level up, so he won't have any rewards to add this time, but most likely, his next reward package will be bigger than Brion's right now.

I was waiting to see what Nimarious's plans were with Fabricate.

[icnivad]

Oh, Nim should be able to fabricate most of whatever you need. If not he can always cast it during the mission.

[michael]

Ok, so instead of buying 7 studded leather bardings for 1750g, I'm buying the materials for 7 studded leather bardings for 583.33g, and refitting the two suits of Full Plate for 1100g.

[reefwood]

Brion Shaw - Re: Level 10 Rewards

Nov 21, 2010 20:39:52 GMT -5 michael said:

Ok, so instead of buying 7 studded leather bardings for 1750g, I'm buying the materials for 7 studded leather bardings for 583.33g, and refitting the two suits of Full Plate for 1100g.

If you're not going to use the leftover amount for anything, and you plan on making more barding in the future, you may as well obtain 650 gp of studded leather raw materials. Whatever doesn't get used up can be saved for later when you obtain more raw materials. Although, you will need to bring it with you or leave it in your equipment locker with the main army.

Looking at the numbers, there would be 66.67 gp studded leather raw materials remaining after fabricating 7 bardings, and that is about 80% of the 83.33 gp needed. 80% of the total weight of 40 lb is 32 lb, so 1/3 more of this amount gives the remaining raw materials a weight of 42.67 lb. Whatever you want to do, just let me know.

And in case you're curious, the raw materials for the 7 Large nonhumanoid studded leather barding weigh 373.33 lb, and enough for 1 weighs 53.33 lb.

Anyway, I will make the first set of fabricate Craft rolls in the morning and post the results on here.

[reefwood]

Nimarious Steerhelm - Animate Undead and Creature HD

I am looking into what happens to excess onyx used in a casting of animate dead and how to determine the HD of a creature. I don't have any certain answers yet, but I have already realized that I have been handing at least one of these things improperly. Anyway, I posted on the Paizo board to see what others may know or have to say, but this is what I have on my own so far:


1) Creature HD
I'm not sure if there is a hard rule on this. I'm pretty sure there isn't any definitive way to determine HD (except for maybe some spell?) in the Rules As Written. The mention about an earlier ruling of mine where I said that it would be "DC 10 + creature's HD" seemed unfamiliar at the time...but after the session, I realized it was based off the Knowledge rule to determine weaknesses of monsters...but then, that seemed awfully easy, especially since HD amount can reveal SO MUCH about a creature. A typical 2 HD undead creature would be Knowledge (religion) DC 12 to learn one thing about its ability or weakness with another thing for every 5 by which you beat the DC, so if your result is 17, you learn two things, and simply learning something means that you could metagame the obvious fact that is must have no more than 7 HD. If your result was 12, you would learn one thing and know that it must have no more than 2 HD. That just seems too easy a way to determine the HD amount (plus everything else this would tell you).

Anyway, turns out that I was wrong about the Knowledge DC.

Identify a monster's abilities and weaknesses: Knowledge (varies) DC 10 + monster's CR
You can use this skill to identify monsters and their special powers or vulnerabilities. In general, the DC of such a check equals 10 + the monster's CR. For common monsters, such as goblins, the DC of this check equals 5 + the monster's CR. For particularly rare monsters, such as the tarrasque, the DC of this check equals 15 + the monster's CR, or more. A successful check allows you to remember a bit of useful information about that monster. For every 5 points by which your check result exceeds the DC, you recall another piece of useful information.

The DC isn't based off HD at all. It is based off CR. Therefore, a 2 HD creature with CR 2 would be DC 12 to learn something, but a 2 HD creature with CR 6 would be DC 16 to learn something, and HD has nothing to do with the DC.

I think it should be difficult to determine the exact HD of a creature since it can automatically reveal a lot of additional info. A couple ideas I'm toying with for DC are:
DC 10 +CR + HD
DC 10 +CR +5 or DC 10 +CR +10 (perhaps based on rarity?)

Using the first idea, a standard shark would be Knowledge (nature) DC 10 +2 CR +4 HD = DC 16. A standard dire shark would be Knowledge (nature) DC 10 +9 CR +15 HD = DC 34.

Using the second idea, it could work a few ways to determine HD:

[/b]] A standard shark would be Knowledge (nature) DC 10 +2 CR +5 = DC 17. A standard dire shark would be Knowledge (nature) DC 10 +9 CR +5 = DC 24.
[B] A standard shark would be Knowledge (nature) DC 10 +2 CR +10 = DC 22. A standard dire shark would be Knowledge (nature) DC 10 +9 CR +10 = DC 29.
[C] A standard shark would be Knowledge (nature) DC 10 +2 CR +5 = DC 17. A standard dire shark would be Knowledge (nature) DC 10 +9 CR +10 rare = DC 29.[/ul]

Additionally, not all creatures I throw at you have the normal HD for that creature, so creatures with higher or lower HD than normal will have an increased DC to determine their exact HD. So, if you hit the DC for a typical version of this creature but not the increased DC, you will probably think it is a typical version with normal HD.

And again, these are my ideas right now but nothing is set in stone yet.

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2) Onyx

Components V, S, M (an onyx gem worth at least 25 gp per Hit Die of the undead)

I notice now that this seems to indicate a single onyx gem is required, as opposed to the multiple gem option I've given in this campaign. I don't feel like changing the rule to one gem, even if that is how it is supposed to work. At least not for this campaign. Anyway, I'm looking into the question about what happens if not enough or too much onyx is used.

[reefwood]

Sahme Sweetwater - 10th-level corrections

1) It looks like hit points have not been rolled for this level yet. Also, the previous total from 9th-level adds up to 80 hp, but only 79 hp are listed. And what happened to the brooch of shielding?


2) The +1 increase to BAB and +1 Str mod increase means than CMB and CMD should increase by +2 for totals of CMB +12 and CMD 27.


3) You forgot to add skill points.


4) Carrying capacity increases with the added Strength bonus.


5) Natural Attacks

Full Round Natural Attack: claw, claw, bite
13(11) Claws, magic: (1d6+6(8)(+4)(11 w/ both) [6-11]
10(8) Bite, magic: (1d6+3(4)) [+2(+50%)]

The claw attack and damage numbers look good, but your notes at the end should probably be (12 w/both) [7-12], and the max amount you can do with bull's strength and Power Attack is 18 damage. That's pretty wowzers for a sorcerer! Especially if you hit with both attacks!!

However, the Bite attack should be +12 attack (+6 BAB +6 Str mod) and 1d6+9 damage cos it gets x1.5 Str mod (+6 Str mod x1.5 = +9) on damage for being a dragon bite, or +10 attack and 1d6+15 when using Power Attack because PA gives you +6 damage right now when using a natural attack that receives x1.5 Str mod. Therefore, bull's strength would increase the Bite to +14 attack and 1d6+12 damage (+8 Str mod x1.5 = +12), or +12 attack and 1d6+18 when using Power Attack too, so when this is all suped up, it will do at least 19 pts of damage!

Bite: +12 attack, 1d6+9 damage
Bite w/bull's strength: +14 attack, 1d6+12 damage
Bite w/Power Attack: +10 attack, 1d6+15 damage
Bite w/bull's strength & Power Attack: +12 attack, 1d6+18 damage


This seems like enough to look at for right now. Once these numbers are corrected, send me an updated character sheet, and I'll check the changes and the rest.

[michael]

I really love that our cleric and our sorcerer are formidable melee fighters.

[Rabbit]

Sorry, I thought that update went really fast! Revision sent your way and not sure why the brooch of shielding was missing but so was the headband of alluring charisma (though the numbers had been applied to everything... must have gotten deleted from the equipemnt section) Should be good to go.

Dec 21, 2010 16:18:23 GMT -5 michael said:

I really love that our cleric and our sorcerer are formidable melee fighters.

Yeah, it rules. I like that I can build Sahme with the notion that if fireballs can't take an opponent down he can just fly down and rip them apart (and do a good job of it, too.) It has also allowed me to use some spell slots in protective magic to negate other casters.

Very Red Dragon of him.

[reefwood]

Sahme Sweetwater - 10th-level corrections, part 2

Dec 21, 2010 15:53:20 GMT -5 reefwood said:

1) It looks like hit points have not been rolled for this level yet. Also, the previous total from 9th-level adds up to 80 hp, but only 79 hp are listed. And what happened to the brooch of shielding?.

The rolled hit points +2 Con look good, but you forgot to add +1 from the Toughness feat, so his new total should be 93 hp. Dang!

2) The +1 increase to BAB and +1 Str mod increase means than CMB and CMD should increase by +2 for totals of CMB +12 and CMD 27.

These totals are now correct, but CMB still incorrectly lists BAB as +5 instead of +6.

3) You forgot to add skill points.

13 [7+3+1+0+2] Perception (Wis)
11 [4+3+1+3+0] Profession (military) (Wis)**
14 [6+3+1+4+0] Spell Craft (Int)**

You added one too many skill points to Perception. You get 3 skill points this level but added 4.

Also, the competence bonus to military skills is half your character level, so it is now +5, but Prof(military) has it listed as +3 and Spellcraft has it listed as +4.

4) Carrying capacity increases with the added Strength bonus.

Looks good! And again, dang!!

5) Natural Attacks
The claw attack and damage numbers look good, but your notes at the end should probably be (12 w/both) [7-12], and the max amount you can do with bull's strength and Power Attack is 18 damage. That's pretty wowzers for a sorcerer! Especially if you hit with both attacks!!

Bite: +12 attack, 1d6+9 damage
Bite w/bull's strength: +14 attack, 1d6+12 damage
Bite w/Power Attack: +10 attack, 1d6+15 damage
Bite w/bull's strength & Power Attack: +12 attack, 1d6+18 damage

These all look good now, but something I didn't get to last time is that the Masterwork Longspear is +12 +13 attack, and it is a two-handed weapon, so it receives the same damage bonuses as the bite (1d8+9 for a regular attack)... and actually, all its attack and damage numbers are the same as the bite. The main differences are that the masterwork longspear is a reach weapons and needs two hands to use, the damage dice are different, and the longspear gets an extra +1 to attack for being masterwork.

AC: 24(26)/28(30) [10+3dex+5armor+1dodge+4natural+1deflection] / (w/ Shield+4)
Flat: 19/23 Touch: 16 (18)
(19 no armo, 21 w/emissary garb)

Flat-footed AC should be 1 higher since it is AC 24 -Dex and -Dodge bonuses which total -4.

Touch AC should be 1 lower since it is only 10 +3 Dex +1 Dodge +1 Deflection = 15.

RANGED [6 lbs.]
9(11) Crossbow, light (masterwork) 335 gp; 4 lbs; 80ft Ammunition: (1b8) -Bolts (x10), 1 gp, 1lb.
(1d8-1) -Bolts, alchemical silver (x10), 21gp, 1lb.

The regular attack with the masterwork crossbow increases to +10 from the +1 BAB increase.

Charges x01. Invisibility, Greater: As invisibility, subject can attack and stay invisible. 8 rounds.
Charges x06. Invisibility, Greater: As invisibility, but subject can attack and stay invisible. (420 per charge)

As a 4th-level spell, these wands have a minimum caster level of 7, so their charges last 7 rounds. Not 8.

Charges x07. Dispel Magic: Cancels one magical spell or effect. (225gp per charge)

The 9th-level character sheet also lists this wand as having 7 charges, but I remember that Sahme used at least one charge during Chapter 10 [Securing the Dock]. He used it to open the "tool shed" stone building with the boat, supplies, and children hidden underneath.

Level 9
Charges x03. Phantasmal Killer: Fearsome illusion kills subject or deals 3d6 damage. (420gp per charge)
Charges x07. Phantasmal Killer: Fearsome illusion kills subject or deals 3d6 damage. (420gp per charge)
Charges x04 Blink: You randomly vanish and reappear for 1 round per level. (225 per charge.)

Level 10
Charges x03. Phantasmal Killer: Fearsome illusion kills subject or deals 3d6 damage. (420gp per charge)

I'm pretty sure that Sahme used at least one charge of Phantasmal Killer against the gnome caster at the top of the lighthouse, but it looks like 2 whole wands vanished from the previous level. Or did you change this equipment before Chapter 10 started?

MAGIC:
-Concentration: 13/17* [10 CL+3 Chr] [*+4 to cast a spell or use a spell-like ability on the defensive or grappled]
-Casting Defensively: (0-level = DC 15, 1st-level = DC 17, 2nd-level = DC 19, 3rd-level = DC 21)
-Spell Resistance: (1d20 + 8 Caster Lvl)

These numbers are a bit off. Should be:

-Concentration: 13/17* [9 CL+4 Chr] [*+4 to cast a spell or use a spell-like ability on the defensive or grappled]
-Casting Defensively: (0-level = DC 15, 1st-level = DC 17, 2nd-level = DC 19, 3rd-level = DC 21)
-Spell Resistance: (1d20 + 9 Caster Lvl)

The rest of the spell stats look good. You should know that Nimarious can also cast detect thoughts, which isn't to say you shouldn't take it...especially since you may not always be on the same missions together, and I don't think he usually prepares it anyway.

Once you have all these corrected, email me the final version, and I'll send you the Reward Package, as well as look into fixing your Income.